一、以下四种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”来源www.bdsh5.com。
1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语b.d.s.h.5.c.o.m。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等本地生活网。
[原文]We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
[修正]Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
[原文]The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.
[修正]Hearing the bad news,the young man couldnt help crying.
2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等b~d~s~h~5~c~o~m。
①强调句
[原文]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely.[修正]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.
②由what等引导的从句,此处的what相当于中文的“所……”,有很大的概括力,如:
[原文]We had to stand there to catch the offender.
[修正]What we had to do was (to) stand there,trying to catch the offender.
What China has achieved in recent years is known through the world.
China is no longer what it used to be.
③由with或without引导的短语本.地.生.活.网。如:
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
④分词短语b_d_s_h_5_c_o_m。如:
Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.